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- 14:17, 11 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+79) . . m Talk:Technology (→Launch)
- 14:16, 11 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+759) . . Talk:Technology
- 23:30, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+345) . . N Hariva (Created page with "Hariva is a merchant of mixed Halgon and Damamat provenance; he's a merchant through and through. He was badly manipulated in his past, and his ability and control over money ...") (current)
- 23:28, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+471) . . N Tallel (Created page with "Tallel is a young man, older than Pukka or Neyu (but not by much]], who works at the Hemuntaari space port before it was bombed by Pertaman. He stows away on t...") (current)
- 23:25, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+136) . . Rangab (current)
- 23:23, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Hanur (Created page with "Hanur was, very briefly, a part of the main cast. Now he's not. Older man, father/uncle figure for Tallel. Category:Character") (current)
- 23:22, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+81) . . Main Page (→Plot)
- 23:21, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+465) . . N Drafts (Created page with "A synopsis of drafts. ==Draft 1== *Opens on ship as it escapes *12 characters *9, 10 minute episodes *Fairly linear main story progression with ancillary monologues *3-act s...") (current)
- 23:10, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+274) . . Talk:Plot (current)
- 22:59, 8 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+361) . . Talk:Vikrannu (current)
- 15:28, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+349) . . Contracted laborer (current)
- 15:26, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+14) . . m Contracted laborer
- 12:44, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+36) . . m Talk:Plot (→Backend notes)
- 12:43, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,176) . . N Talk:Plot (Created page with "==Backend notes== If trying to match structure similar to a film, is it possible that there is one A plot and ''several'' B plots? If so, what's the 3-act structure on this wo...")
- 17:18, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+14) . . Main Page (→Story)
- 17:18, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-226) . . Timeline (current)
- 17:12, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+9,781) . . N Timeline (Created page with "*'''Neyu born'''; has two older sisters (Pukka and Samsithi) and an eldest brother (Eneswa). *'''Neyu age 4''' - The last armistice is declared before current ev...")
- 17:12, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-9,761) . . Story (→Pre-story timeline (Neyu)) (current)
- 17:11, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . m Main Page (→Story)
- 17:10, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . m Main Page (→Story)
- 17:09, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+246) . . N Talk:Chapter 2 r2 (Created page with "==Backend notes== The whole ep needs tightening; there's just no tension from the near escape and the pressure and nearness of Pertaman military advances; they're breaking...") (current)
- 17:08, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+326) . . N Chapter 2 r2 (Created page with "The stowaways are discovered, and Vikrannu chooses to let them remain aboard. *Vikrannu and Rangab find Pukka and Neyu *Vikrannu & Rangab discover there a...") (current)
- 17:06, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+75) . . Story (→Chapter breakdowns first revision)
- 17:04, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+169) . . N Talk:Chapter 1 r1 (Created page with "==Backend notes== *Note timeline based on Neyu's age; conflict has been a long time brewing *Crew, passengers, and stowaways should all be much more upset/afraid/anxious") (current)
- 17:02, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+56) . . Refugees (current)
- 17:01, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+108) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 17:00, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+57) . . Main Page (→Refugees)
- 16:59, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+652) . . N Chapter 1 r1 (Created page with "==Quick notes== *Goal: introduce characters, establish basic premises of setting, establish motivating world event **Neyu and her sister Pukka, and Tallel and co-w...") (current)
- 16:57, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+190) . . Story
- 14:53, 29 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+317) . . N Talk:Mantharaksa (Created page with "==Backend notes== What if Pertaman and Damamat made back door deals over ignoring the cease fire and over sales of petrochem? Secure fuel and plastics production, lock out the...") (current)
- 12:59, 20 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+594) . . N Talk:Contracted laborer (Created page with "==Backend notes== Didn't I have more on this? It's more than an indentured servitude kind of thing, it's a cultural more; the Tanatha have been so impoverished in the decl...") (current)
- 16:32, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+15) . . m Talk:Tanatha (current)
- 16:27, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-356) . . Talk:Tanatha (Replaced content with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: ??")
- 16:25, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+43) . . m Talk:Halgon (→Backend notes) (current)
- 16:24, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+241) . . Talk:Pertaman
- 16:22, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Talk:Halgon (Created page with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: Malagasy. --~~~~")
- 16:22, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Talk:Damamat (Created page with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: Sanskrit. --~~~~") (current)
- 16:21, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+117) . . Talk:Chibal (→Backend notes) (current)
- 16:21, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Talk:Vaasith (Created page with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: Akkadian. --~~~~") (current)
- 14:52, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-109) . . Vaasith (→Culture) (current)
- 14:31, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+99) . . Locations (→Rahik system) (current)
- 13:10, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+55) . . m Main Page (→Refugees)
- 13:09, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+680) . . N Refugees (Created page with "These are people who have boarded the ''Riti'' to escape Pertaman bombardment of Radi, and in particular the primary city and spaceport of Hemuntaari. Everyone...")
- 13:06, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+386) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 21:41, 31 August 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+651) . . N Talk:Story (Created page with "==Backend notes== Considering the revision-ing happening with the story -- particularly in terms of what role the audience plays in a successful transmedia story -- maybe open...") (current)
- 21:23, 31 August 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+170) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 19:05, 29 July 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+264) . . N Talk:Hemuntaari (Created page with "==Backend notes== If Hemuntaari was being beseiged, and then is bombed to hell -- what's the motivation? Vaasith called Pertaman's bluff and found they weren't bluffing at all...") (current)
- 17:46, 29 July 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+115) . . Locations (→Sokkor system)
- 15:17, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+474) . . N Talk:Chapter 2 (Created page with "==Backend notes== I have a huge continuity error here. This should be happening around Gantu, not Tansgit. It's these events that push the Riti crew to try Tansgit; Neyu prote...") (current)
- 13:23, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+911) . . Talk:Vikrannu (→Chapter 1 summary: new section)
- 13:03, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+522) . . Talk:Neyu (→Chapter 1 summary: new section) (current)
- 12:59, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+51) . . m Talk:Chapter 1 (→Backend notes) (current)
- 12:58, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+732) . . Talk:Chapter 1 (→Backend notes)
- 15:52, 27 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+217) . . Talk:Vikrannu (→Backend notes)
- 22:14, 21 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+113) . . m Talk:Riti (→Backend notes)
- 22:13, 21 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+718) . . N Durtha (Created page with "Durtha is Vikrannu's third mate on the Riti, and is the only former member of her special forces squad to have stuck with her after her enforced "honorable dismissal" ...") (current)
- 22:07, 21 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+37) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 22:05, 21 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+106) . . Riti
- 15:56, 15 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+28) . . m Local Cluster (current)
- 15:42, 15 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+81) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 15:41, 15 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,236) . . N Rangab (Created page with "Rangab is a member of the crew of the ''Riti'', the ship captained by Vikrannu. She is a Tanatha who has taken up contracted labor to escape the crushing pover...")
- 15:09, 15 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+319) . . N Sahakil (Created page with "Sahakil is a young Chibal man, an able pilot and navigator hired on by Vikrannu to act as second mate on the ''Riti''. Sahakil holds the contract to Rangab, a ...") (current)
- 15:04, 15 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+29) . . m Talk:Riti (→Backend notes)
- 17:30, 13 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . m Chibal (current)
- 15:44, 13 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+591) . . Chapter 1 (current)
- 15:39, 13 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+179) . . Talk:Riti (→Backend notes)
- 15:37, 13 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+94) . . Talk:Riti (→Backend notes)
- 15:33, 13 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+719) . . N Talk:Riti (Created page with "==Backend notes== Crew *Chief officer - *Second mate/navigator - *Third mate/boatswain - Maybe not all crew needs to be fleshed out, but these three will likely be importa...")
- 14:54, 13 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+320) . . N Riti (Created page with "The ''Riti'' is a tramp freighter sanctioned for long-distance inter-system travel among the Local Cluster. It has been sanctioned in the past to travel to Mannon, but...")
- 21:34, 30 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,572) . . Main Page
- 21:24, 30 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+198) . . History (current)
- 21:23, 30 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+427) . . N Talk:History (Created page with "==Backend notes== This is an alien culture, a completely different people to Homo sapiens. In fact, the reason these people have stumbled onto a cluster of viable planets arou...") (current)
- 21:22, 30 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-441) . . History
- 16:42, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+761) . . Talk:Neyu
- 03:19, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,657) . . N Chapter 10 (Created page with "*Next morning, Neyu's task is to get some things from the market one neighborhood over *In the market there are newsposts, updates on the war and other things **Neyu remembers...") (current)
- 02:59, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+995) . . N Chapter 9 (Created page with "*Like most Vaasith, Neyu understands work; she begins to move around the neighborhoods near the port and asks for a job **She's met with varying degrees of annoyance, disinter...") (current)
- 02:32, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,036) . . N Chapter 8 (Created page with "*Transport is allowed to land in Jutkara *Neyu again tries to convince soldier to let her come with him **Soldier actively threatens her (puts her up against a wall?) and ...") (current)
- 01:52, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+69) . . Story (→Chapter breakdowns)
- 01:50, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,515) . . N Chapter 7 (Created page with "*Transport put in holding pattern around Daksinai *Panic goes through ship **Will they be turned away **Where will people be able to go *Neyu's soldier friend worries they...") (current)
- 01:04, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,068) . . N Chapter 6 (Created page with "*Neyu is again alone *Captain of transport ship is perfunctory with her (maybe Pertaman) *Meets other travellers **Some are leaving to make money (profiteering?) **Some ar...") (current)
- 00:40, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+64) . . N Talk:Pertaman (Created page with "==Backend notes== *Maybe Pertaman and Vaasith have a grudge?")
- 00:15, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,495) . . N Chapter 5 (Created page with "*On the station: **Vikrannu sends Neyu to order supplies for the ship **Vikrannu arranges passage for Neyu to Daksinai, the primary planet in the Rahik system *Vikrann...") (current)
- 00:09, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-421) . . Chapter 4 (current)
- 00:07, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . m Chapter 4
- 00:02, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Story (→Pre-story timeline (Neyu))
- 00:02, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+15) . . m Story (→Pre-story timeline (Neyu))
- 23:54, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+61) . . m Chapter 4
- 23:52, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+61) . . m Chapter 3 (current)
- 23:51, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+61) . . Chapter 2 (current)
- 23:37, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+61) . . Chapter 1
- 23:34, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+263) . . N Talk:Chapter 1 (Created page with "==Backend notes== *Considering the Damamat notion of competency, Vikrannu's crew is much more important and needs to be fleshed out. *Crew and Vikrannu may be hig...")
- 23:30, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+37) . . m Rustevod (current)
- 23:24, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+32) . . N Contracted labor (Redirected page to Contracted laborer) (current)
- 23:21, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Suthan (current)
- 23:19, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+522) . . N Suthan (Created page with "Suthan is a middle aged Tanatha man, a contracted laborer who has earned his freedom through legal completion of his contract. Neyu meets him just after arriving i...")
- 23:01, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,140) . . N Jutkara (Created page with "'''Jutkara''' is the ''de facto'' capital of Zausa, one of the five autonomous regions of Daksinai in the Rahik system. It is one of the oldest Mannon extra-pl...") (current)
- 21:48, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+54) . . Story
- 21:47, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+37) . . m Characters (current)
- 21:47, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+37) . . Culture (current)
- 21:46, 28 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+204) . . Culture (→Vaasith)
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