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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>==Pre-story timeline ([[Neyu]])==</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>==Pre-story timeline ([[Neyu]])==</div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>The war begins as a small conflict among four neighboring countries ([[Prime Four]]) on [[Mannon]]; as the first conflict settles, ripples from it bring other new participants into the fray. The original dispute is over resources, but later involves various other things including long-disputed borders, religious disagreements, and real and imagined slights. National interests on other planets mirror the conflicts and old, inherited grudges from the home-world and play out as well. The [[Sokkor]] system has the benefit of being distant, but the disadvantage of having a lot of good resources, with different portions of different planets under the control of various nations. Skirmishes, privateer raids, and small scale military engagements give way, in time, to larger actions. Why? Because this resource-rich section of space stands to become a major secondary production center to give [[Pertaman]] the ability to finally conquer other states<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">:''See [[Timeline]]''</ins></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Neyu born'''; has two older sisters ([[Pukka]] and [[Samsithi]]) and an eldest brother ([[Eneswa]]).  </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>The war begins as a small conflict among four neighboring countries ([[Prime Four]]) on [[Mannon]]; as the first conflict settles, ripples from it bring other new participants into the fray. The original dispute is over resources, but later involves various other things including long-disputed borders, religious disagreements, and real and imagined slights. National interests on other planets mirror the conflicts and old, inherited grudges from the home-world and play out as well. The [[Sokkor]] system has the benefit of being distant, but the disadvantage of having a lot of good resources, with different portions of different planets under the control of various nations. Skirmishes, privateer raids, and small scale military engagements give way, in time, to larger actions. Why? Because this resource-rich section of space stands to become a major secondary production center to give [[Pertaman]] the ability to finally conquer other states.</div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Neyu age 4''' - The last armistice is declared before current events. It lasts 18 months before collapsing.</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 6''' - sent with Pukka and Samsithi to live with an aunt ([[Kaaru]]) in the highlands; stays for two years until Kaaru sends her back, unable to afford extra mouths, regardless of how hard they work. Neyu doesn’t understand why they’ve been sent off, but her father’s done it to protect them from roving bands of armed men that have started appearing. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 10''' - Radi starts to suffer; longer raids, more privateering; actual war on Gantu. Money becomes scarce, buyers for Radi goods become scarce. A captain named [[Vikrannu]] makes a name for herself by braving the privateer lines and running blockades. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 12''' - Neyu’s mother [[Somannu]], along with Pukka, begin investigating getting away from Radi, even abandoning their farm. At one point, Somannu considers indentured servitude to pay off the travel costs. Hazan won’t hear of it. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 13''' - Hazan returns empty handed and talks about roving bands of either mercenaries or vigilantes or low-grade conscripts, harrassing people on the roads. He had to travel through brush and wood to avoid them. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 14''' - It’s been three months since Neyu has seen her parents. Pukka has done her best to keep things together, but the fear and worry wear on her, and there are more and more sounds of fighting, and of fighting getting closer, every day. She practices with a small pistol her father gave her, but knows she has to preserve ammunition. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 14''' - Aircraft are passing over, thundering hard overhead. They’ve never heard them before, but the thumping sounds from far off must be bombs, the girls realise. Pukka begins to devise an escape plan. It revolves around their brother Eneswa still being either at the regional spaceport, or maybe being on Gantu: they meet up with him, then try to find their parents. They try communicating with the spaceport, but it’s impossible to tell if communications relays are down, or if no one is answering on the other end. They start to plan their route to the port, through woods and brush, because they know the roads aren’t safe. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 14''' - The girls learn to hide in the basement, the one with the trap door hidden under their parents’ bed, which is just high enough to allow the hatch to open for the girls to squirm through. They’ve been lucky so far in not being found, but when they’re hiding, they can’t protect the farm from thieves and marauders, who have made off with all the goats and any crop that’s managed to grow. They have no other option but to leave.</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 14''' - The girls lock up the house as best they can and head cross-country to the port. In the night, as they keep hidden as best they can, they can see there’s a pitched battle happening in that same direction; fires, explosions, glowing shells and ammunition thrown into the sky. They know they can’t go back, so they keep going forward. </del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">*'''Age 14''' - There are soldiers in actual uniforms on the outskirts of [[Hemuntaari]] (the regional capital and home to the spaceport), Pertaman ones (or at least ones that look like Pertaman uniforms). They generally leave the girls alone, except for one older woman who asks them where they’re going and why they’re out alone. The girls reply that they’re trying to get to the spaceport. The woman laughs harshly and says they’re much better off in the countryside, and that getting off-world right now is a tough ask. She half-heartedly tries to recruit Pukka, who refuses, and the girls move on.</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>The war begins as a small conflict among four neighboring countries ([[Prime Four]] on [[Mannon]]; as the first conflict settles, ripples from it bring other new participants into the fray. The original dispute is over resources, but later involves various other things including long-disputed borders, religious disagreements, and real and imagined slights. National interests on other planets mirror the conflicts and old, inherited grudges from the home-world and play out as well. The [[Sokkor]] system has the benefit of being distant, but the disadvantage of having a lot of good resources, with different portions of different planets under the control of various nations. Skirmishes, privateer raids, and small scale military engagements give way, in time, to larger actions. Why? Because this resource-rich section of space stands to become a major secondary production center to give [[Pertaman]] the ability to finally conquer other states.  </div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>The war begins as a small conflict among four neighboring countries ([[Prime Four]]<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">) </ins>on [[Mannon]]; as the first conflict settles, ripples from it bring other new participants into the fray. The original dispute is over resources, but later involves various other things including long-disputed borders, religious disagreements, and real and imagined slights. National interests on other planets mirror the conflicts and old, inherited grudges from the home-world and play out as well. The [[Sokkor]] system has the benefit of being distant, but the disadvantage of having a lot of good resources, with different portions of different planets under the control of various nations. Skirmishes, privateer raids, and small scale military engagements give way, in time, to larger actions. Why? Because this resource-rich section of space stands to become a major secondary production center to give [[Pertaman]] the ability to finally conquer other states.  </div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*'''Neyu born'''; has two older sisters ([[Pukka]] and [[Samsithi]]) and an eldest brother ([[Eneswa]]).   </div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*'''Neyu born'''; has two older sisters ([[Pukka]] and [[Samsithi]]) and an eldest brother ([[Eneswa]]).   </div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*[[Chapter 3]] - in which Neyu confronts the reality of being able to rely on no one but herself; learn a little of Neyu's and Vikrannu's past; a [[Damamat]] ship allied with Pertaman, part of a line of ships moving to blockade the primary Tansgit world of [[Aangra]], is captained by an old military colleague of Vikrannu and offers her reinstatement in the Damamat military; Vikrannu agrees; Neyu overhears and is horrified she's in a ship captained by an ally of her enemy</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*[[Chapter 3]] - in which Neyu confronts the reality of being able to rely on no one but herself; learn a little of Neyu's and Vikrannu's past; a [[Damamat]] ship allied with Pertaman, part of a line of ships moving to blockade the primary Tansgit world of [[Aangra]], is captained by an old military colleague of Vikrannu and offers her reinstatement in the Damamat military; Vikrannu agrees; Neyu overhears and is horrified she's in a ship captained by an ally of her enemy</div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*'''Age 14''' - Neyu stands outside, talking to some soldiers fresh out of the port, with its single functioning landing zone. She begs for anything, scraps, as the sky darkens overhead. She pays it little attention, but suddenly the sound of anti-aircraft guns stops all conversation. She ducks and covers, like most of the others; the soldiers panic behind the concrete barriers and scramble to their battle stations. Suddenly she’s hauled off the ground — Pukka has grabbed her and is running for her life down the street. And then there’s the noise. So much noise, the kind that thumps the chest like a kick. The girls tumble to the ground in the shockwave. The enemy is pulling for that last working landing zone. They both scramble to their feet; Neyu grabs hold of her sister and they run again, anywhere, everywhere. There is no place to hide. No safe place. Another explosion, they’re both on the ground again. Neyu scrambles up first, helps Pukka. There’s blood, but she can’t tell from where. And off they run again. The skies clear, the rumbling fades. People, after  moment, stop moving and look around. Destruction. Half the warehouses are gone in smoke and rubble and fire. And then they hear it. The deep, low hum, the darkening of the skies — another bombing run. Pukka and Neyu tear off, anywhere. Wherever the terrain’s not torn up beyond negotiation. They come around the lip of a recent crater, deep, and Pukka looks over her shoulder. The next thing Neyu knows, she’s in the air and over the crest of the crater, falling down into it — before the bomb. Pukka’s thrown her. Pukka’s about to follow Neyu in, but the bomb hits, and a chunk of debris knocks her right out of the air. And now Neyu is alone.  </div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>*'''Age 14''' - Neyu stands outside, talking to some soldiers fresh out of the port, with its single functioning landing zone. She begs for anything, scraps, as the sky darkens overhead. She pays it little attention, but suddenly the sound of anti-aircraft guns stops all conversation. She ducks and covers, like most of the others; the soldiers panic behind the concrete barriers and scramble to their battle stations. Suddenly she’s hauled off the ground — Pukka has grabbed her and is running for her life down the street. And then there’s the noise. So much noise, the kind that thumps the chest like a kick. The girls tumble to the ground in the shockwave. The enemy is pulling for that last working landing zone. They both scramble to their feet; Neyu grabs hold of her sister and they run again, anywhere, everywhere. There is no place to hide. No safe place. Another explosion, they’re both on the ground again. Neyu scrambles up first, helps Pukka. There’s blood, but she can’t tell from where. And off they run again. The skies clear, the rumbling fades. People, after  moment, stop moving and look around. Destruction. Half the warehouses are gone in smoke and rubble and fire. And then they hear it. The deep, low hum, the darkening of the skies — another bombing run. Pukka and Neyu tear off, anywhere. Wherever the terrain’s not torn up beyond negotiation. They come around the lip of a recent crater, deep, and Pukka looks over her shoulder. The next thing Neyu knows, she’s in the air and over the crest of the crater, falling down into it — before the bomb. Pukka’s thrown her. Pukka’s about to follow Neyu in, but the bomb hits, and a chunk of debris knocks her right out of the air. And now Neyu is alone.  </div></td></tr>
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