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If trying to match structure similar to a film, is it possible that there is one A plot and ''several'' B plots? If so, what's the 3-act structure on this work? | If trying to match structure similar to a film, is it possible that there is one A plot and ''several'' B plots? If so, what's the 3-act structure on this work? | ||
− | *Inciting incident: Bombing of Hemuntaari | + | *'''Inciting incident''': Bombing of Hemuntaari |
− | *First plot point: may happen early in ep 4, not somewhere in ep 3. | + | *'''First plot point''': may happen early in ep 4, not somewhere in ep 3. |
**Is it Neyu learning her sister's unit was considered a total loss? | **Is it Neyu learning her sister's unit was considered a total loss? | ||
**Is a B plot point the Pertaman passenger arriving? | **Is a B plot point the Pertaman passenger arriving? | ||
− | *What is the mid point? What's going on? Where are they? On the ship? On Gantu? | + | *What is the '''mid point'''? What's going on? Where are they? On the ship? On Gantu? |
− | *What is Plot Point 2? If we still go with Neyu as the nominal primary character, then what if Samsithi returns? | + | *What is '''Plot Point 2'''? If we still go with Neyu as the nominal primary character, then what if Samsithi returns? |
**Sami should ''not'' rescue her sisters; she's ruined and rattled from the fighting (echoes of WWI) | **Sami should ''not'' rescue her sisters; she's ruined and rattled from the fighting (echoes of WWI) | ||
**She finds them and seeks refuge, leaving Neyu and Pukka with "leadership" roles | **She finds them and seeks refuge, leaving Neyu and Pukka with "leadership" roles | ||
− | *What if P2 is the crew discovering their AWOL passenger? | + | *What if '''P2''' is the crew discovering their AWOL passenger? |
− | *What is the climax? Fighting to reach Jutkara? What are they fighting against? Are Pertaman forces chasing after their AWOL people? And if so, why? | + | *What is the '''climax'''? Fighting to reach Jutkara? What are they fighting against? Are Pertaman forces chasing after their AWOL people? And if so, why? |
===Act 1=== | ===Act 1=== | ||
*Inciting incident: bombing of Hemuntaari | *Inciting incident: bombing of Hemuntaari | ||
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===Act 3=== | ===Act 3=== | ||
*Climax: ___________ | *Climax: ___________ | ||
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+ | ==Update 9 Oct 2013== | ||
+ | Consolidating/eliminating characters; down to 9 from 12. Interweaving characters more in backstories which will be illuminated in animatics or side audio clips. --[[User:Adminwiki|Adminwiki]] ([[User talk:Adminwiki|talk]]) 22:10, 9 October 2013 (EST) |
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Backend notes
If trying to match structure similar to a film, is it possible that there is one A plot and several B plots? If so, what's the 3-act structure on this work?
- Inciting incident: Bombing of Hemuntaari
- First plot point: may happen early in ep 4, not somewhere in ep 3.
- Is it Neyu learning her sister's unit was considered a total loss?
- Is a B plot point the Pertaman passenger arriving?
- What is the mid point? What's going on? Where are they? On the ship? On Gantu?
- What is Plot Point 2? If we still go with Neyu as the nominal primary character, then what if Samsithi returns?
- Sami should not rescue her sisters; she's ruined and rattled from the fighting (echoes of WWI)
- She finds them and seeks refuge, leaving Neyu and Pukka with "leadership" roles
- What if P2 is the crew discovering their AWOL passenger?
- What is the climax? Fighting to reach Jutkara? What are they fighting against? Are Pertaman forces chasing after their AWOL people? And if so, why?
Act 1
- Inciting incident: bombing of Hemuntaari
- Plot Point 1: ______________
Act 2
- Midpoint: _____________
- Plot Point 2: ___________
Act 3
- Climax: ___________
Update 9 Oct 2013
Consolidating/eliminating characters; down to 9 from 12. Interweaving characters more in backstories which will be illuminated in animatics or side audio clips. --Adminwiki (talk) 22:10, 9 October 2013 (EST)