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- 13:17, 11 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+79) . . m Talk:Technology (→Launch)
- 13:16, 11 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+759) . . Talk:Technology
- 22:30, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+345) . . N Hariva (Created page with "Hariva is a merchant of mixed Halgon and Damamat provenance; he's a merchant through and through. He was badly manipulated in his past, and his ability and control over money ...") (current)
- 22:28, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+471) . . N Tallel (Created page with "Tallel is a young man, older than Pukka or Neyu (but not by much]], who works at the Hemuntaari space port before it was bombed by Pertaman. He stows away on t...") (current)
- 22:25, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+136) . . Rangab (current)
- 22:23, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Hanur (Created page with "Hanur was, very briefly, a part of the main cast. Now he's not. Older man, father/uncle figure for Tallel. Category:Character") (current)
- 22:22, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+81) . . Main Page (→Plot)
- 22:21, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+465) . . N Drafts (Created page with "A synopsis of drafts. ==Draft 1== *Opens on ship as it escapes *12 characters *9, 10 minute episodes *Fairly linear main story progression with ancillary monologues *3-act s...") (current)
- 22:10, 9 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+274) . . Talk:Plot (current)
- 21:59, 8 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+361) . . Talk:Vikrannu (current)
- 14:28, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+349) . . Contracted laborer (current)
- 14:26, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+14) . . m Contracted laborer
- 11:44, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+36) . . m Talk:Plot (→Backend notes)
- 11:43, 7 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1,176) . . N Talk:Plot (Created page with "==Backend notes== If trying to match structure similar to a film, is it possible that there is one A plot and ''several'' B plots? If so, what's the 3-act structure on this wo...")
- 16:18, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+14) . . Main Page (→Story)
- 16:18, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-226) . . Timeline (current)
- 16:12, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+9,781) . . N Timeline (Created page with "*'''Neyu born'''; has two older sisters (Pukka and Samsithi) and an eldest brother (Eneswa). *'''Neyu age 4''' - The last armistice is declared before current ev...")
- 16:12, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-9,761) . . Story (→Pre-story timeline (Neyu)) (current)
- 16:11, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . m Main Page (→Story)
- 16:10, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . m Main Page (→Story)
- 16:09, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+246) . . N Talk:Chapter 2 r2 (Created page with "==Backend notes== The whole ep needs tightening; there's just no tension from the near escape and the pressure and nearness of Pertaman military advances; they're breaking...") (current)
- 16:08, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+326) . . N Chapter 2 r2 (Created page with "The stowaways are discovered, and Vikrannu chooses to let them remain aboard. *Vikrannu and Rangab find Pukka and Neyu *Vikrannu & Rangab discover there a...") (current)
- 16:06, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+75) . . Story (→Chapter breakdowns first revision)
- 16:04, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+169) . . N Talk:Chapter 1 r1 (Created page with "==Backend notes== *Note timeline based on Neyu's age; conflict has been a long time brewing *Crew, passengers, and stowaways should all be much more upset/afraid/anxious") (current)
- 16:02, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+56) . . Refugees (current)
- 16:01, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+108) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 16:00, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+57) . . Main Page (→Refugees)
- 15:59, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+652) . . N Chapter 1 r1 (Created page with "==Quick notes== *Goal: introduce characters, establish basic premises of setting, establish motivating world event **Neyu and her sister Pukka, and Tallel and co-w...") (current)
- 15:57, 5 October 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+190) . . Story
- 13:53, 29 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+317) . . N Talk:Mantharaksa (Created page with "==Backend notes== What if Pertaman and Damamat made back door deals over ignoring the cease fire and over sales of petrochem? Secure fuel and plastics production, lock out the...") (current)
- 11:59, 20 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+594) . . N Talk:Contracted laborer (Created page with "==Backend notes== Didn't I have more on this? It's more than an indentured servitude kind of thing, it's a cultural more; the Tanatha have been so impoverished in the decl...") (current)
- 15:32, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+15) . . m Talk:Tanatha (current)
- 15:27, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-356) . . Talk:Tanatha (Replaced content with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: ??")
- 15:25, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+43) . . m Talk:Halgon (→Backend notes) (current)
- 15:24, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+241) . . Talk:Pertaman
- 15:22, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Talk:Halgon (Created page with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: Malagasy. --~~~~")
- 15:22, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Talk:Damamat (Created page with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: Sanskrit. --~~~~") (current)
- 15:21, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+117) . . Talk:Chibal (→Backend notes) (current)
- 15:21, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+133) . . N Talk:Vaasith (Created page with "==Backend notes== Conlang base: Akkadian. --~~~~") (current)
- 13:52, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-109) . . Vaasith (→Culture) (current)
- 13:31, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+99) . . Locations (→Rahik system) (current)
- 12:10, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+55) . . m Main Page (→Refugees)
- 12:09, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+680) . . N Refugees (Created page with "These are people who have boarded the ''Riti'' to escape Pertaman bombardment of Radi, and in particular the primary city and spaceport of Hemuntaari. Everyone...")
- 12:06, 1 September 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+386) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 20:41, 31 August 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+651) . . N Talk:Story (Created page with "==Backend notes== Considering the revision-ing happening with the story -- particularly in terms of what role the audience plays in a successful transmedia story -- maybe open...") (current)
- 20:23, 31 August 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+170) . . Main Page (→Characters)
- 18:05, 29 July 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+264) . . N Talk:Hemuntaari (Created page with "==Backend notes== If Hemuntaari was being beseiged, and then is bombed to hell -- what's the motivation? Vaasith called Pertaman's bluff and found they weren't bluffing at all...") (current)
- 16:46, 29 July 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+115) . . Locations (→Sokkor system)
- 14:17, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+474) . . N Talk:Chapter 2 (Created page with "==Backend notes== I have a huge continuity error here. This should be happening around Gantu, not Tansgit. It's these events that push the Riti crew to try Tansgit; Neyu prote...") (current)
- 12:23, 3 June 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+911) . . Talk:Vikrannu (→Chapter 1 summary: new section)
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